Letting go

 Is there anything left between us anymore...

All the blaming, the guilt tripping, the misunderstandings are the reason why we are here 

But why is it that I am still ready to let it all go and accept you 

It hurts to know that you wouldn't do the same but loving you is the only thing I know 

you swore it would get easier, was I too hard for you to love me?

I would find a way to tear all the recollections you have left me...

only for you to come back and bury me in some more 

Trapped inside my own mind, scared of letting you go 

my dandelion life turned into charcoal by your words in seconds...



Comments

  1. The imagery and emotions you've expressed are powerful

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  2. Very beautifully written ❤️

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  3. Beautifully written, your ability to express your vulnerability is powerful.

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  4. This is beautifully written!! Love it

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  5. Captivating and uniquely written

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  6. Dear Ummi,

    Your words truly resonate with raw emotion and vulnerability. This heartfelt expression of love, pain, and the complexity of relationships is beautifully conveyed in your writing. It's a testament to your talent that you can evoke such strong feelings through your words. Thank you for sharing this piece, and for giving voice to the intricate feelings that many of us experience. Keep writing and sharing your thoughts with the world.🫢🏻

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  7. The image is heart touching and words are well explained.....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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  8. Bro touched my soul

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  9. W blog 🀟🀟

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  10. Who broke you dude

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  11. Heart touching words ❤

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  12. made me tear up✋congratulations on writing a powerful empathic piece😭

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  13. Very nice umaima, I am very happy after reading this article, I pray to Allah Almighty to grant you lots of success and happiness in life.. i proude u ....

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